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Bittersweet Memories by ~MadFunk:iconMadFunk:





//Bittersweet Memories
"We're here"
Stepping left
Dirty boot tapping, pushing
Cracking open the capsule
Of this white nineteen eighty-something

The prints fresh
Whispered away by the wind
Brushing away the specks of dirt
As if God was
The slowest archaeologist

We look ahead
At the sad, cold figure
Sitting solely
Alone, dead
At the end of the endless
Dirt road
A barren curve
Rounding mathematically off
Into nowhere

The sky is darker here
Though no different than
The year preceding this
But darker, somehow
Than it ever has been
Or ever will be
This day, the smallest
Chronologically claustrophobic

Something is different
The smell of something
Brought on still winds
Or not brought
At all

With a look, once again
A yearly routine
The tiles a bit rustier
The car a bit older
We step back in
Taking with us a photograph
To stick in a binder
To lose
And forget about
Because we need an excuse
To return next year
©2004-2010 ~MadFunk
:iconmadfunk:

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Another Inspired By poem. You can view the inspiration here [link]

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:iconpokemonmaster250:
by the sound of that uve wrote a few poems
:iconmadfunk:
I've wrote about 30 or 40, most of which are here in my gallery, if you've got a check to thumb through them. Thanks for the fav :)
:iconmadfunk:
*sec to thumb through them.
I don't think I've ever typoed rhyming words.
:iconpokemonmaster250:
ty ok ill check em out sometime
:iconbananamint:
...this is incredible.
:iconmadfunk:
Wow. Thanks. This type of comment is always the best. It reminds me that I can have an impact on people, and that alone is a great motivator.
:iconzetab:
i'm no writer and certainly don't know too much about poetry. but I can honestly say that I enjoyed reading this :nod: enough to have read it all over again! you have done such a good job with the writing. expressive indeed :p :+fav:

it's also amazing to know what one of photos inspired you to write something :wow:

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Zeta B.
Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

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